Areas To Work On:
Introductions - answer the question in the introduction - is freedom of speech necessary? Answer the question directly e.g.
I believe freedom of speech is an essential right and the cornerstone of any free, democratic society.
NOT
I agree with the statement.
Conclusions - rephrase your opinion.
Organisation - clear paragraphs - leave a line or indent - don't number them. No one sentence paragraphs.
Spelling - speach speech foundamental fundamental
The Zero Article - the freedom of speech is a fundamental right in all the societies
No article when speaking generally or before most plurals.
Range of Tenses
Freedom of speech becomes one of the basic rights across the world.
Use Verbs Not Nouns
There was the censorship of everything - Everything was censored
Verb Structure
We might have to put some limits on it for protect.
Freedom of criticise
Infinitives to show purpose
n.b.
Free to do something
Worth doing something
Sentence Structure
To say what you think it's absolutely essential
It must be protected the right of privacy
Confusion with word forms
think (verb) thought (noun) freedom (noun) free (adjective)
a freedom society
Like/As/Such As
One of the most _______ + plural
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