Thursday, 8 November 2012

GPII Group 16 B1.3 Lesson 6 8/11/12

Lesson 6
8/11/12

Class
Writing Assessments – Feedback

Letter

You don’t know the reader so you need to be very formal and polite
•No contractions: can’t - can not
•I mean - In other words

Madam not Madame
Information – uncountable – never plural
I would to know – I would like to know
What sort of people attend the course? – Be more specific e.g. Where are the students from? Are they law students or practicing lawyers?

Report
Make conclusions based on the data try not to make up conclusions that rely on information from outside the graph/table provided.
e.g.
It seems from the data that more people are deciding to live alone which will have future implications for housing, infrastructure, taxation policy and pensions.
The graph showed projected growth so FUTURE tenses were needed.
Composed of not composed by
Has an increase - not really the right collocation use increase as a verb or use the verb to be
e.g. There will be an increase in the number of one person households OR The number of single person households will increase.
Two million not two millions

Homework
  1. Third Conditional - read the notes in the links above and finish the exercises on p. 125 (questions 7 and 8)
  2. Correct your letter and report.









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